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No. 577850
I wrote this song last year after watching an anime, I was pissed at the hypocrisy:
Pretty Poison
Sticky sweet,
I wanted to believe…
It just felt so real to me.
Sickeningly sweet,
Hard to believe…
Your words are filled with poison to this day.
Drink the bottle,
Drink the bottle;
Killing hope and innocence.
Drink the bottle,
Drink the bottle;
How can you erase something so pure?
Sticky sweet,
I wanted to believe…
You were human after all.
Sickeningly sweet,
Rotting your teeth…
Thought your love was true.
(Well, is it?!)
Oh sweet poison,
Why did you deceive me?
I wanted to believe…
Your love was real.
Drink again,
Drink the bottle;
Your words make me ill.
No. 577870
>>577850what anime?
Your lyrics sound a bit like onision wrote them tbh
No. 578154
>>577870It was an anime I watched since childhood. When I was a kid watching it for the first time; I thought the character changed and was really kind, hence the words “I wanted to believe”. I was taken aback with his narcissistic personality, ambitions and carelessness for others in order to reach those goals when the second season rolled around. It made me really sad at the time so I wrote the song in the mind of an 11-year old. When I read the manga a few years later, I was unfazed about it anymore.
Also ew, how dare you compare my songs to that degenerate piece of shit’s music? If I knew how to send recordings here of me singing it, it would never be classified as an “Onision song” otherwise.
No. 586857
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I wrote a song about my golden child sister
No. 586859
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>>586857>I wish was treated so wellMeant “I wished I was treated so well”
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No. 591939
>>586913FL Studio is pretty beginner friendly. I'd just watch a few beginner tutorials and go from there.
If you're curious as to what proper composition looks like, try downloading some royalty free .FLP files or MIDIs. The Touhou MIDIs for example are all royalty free if you wanna play around and are about as classic gaming music as you can get.
https://gamebanana.com/projects/35179 No. 591996
>>591957- The minilab looks neat, if it's not already working out of the box, try to find how to activate and control the volume/effect loop/pan of each different tracks of your project
- Find sample packs for the classical drum machines (707, 808)
- First try to lay out a very basic 4/4 loop, then expand and add variations once you have the basic sound and rhythmic feel.
- Find some VSTs for the synthesizers, or again just a sample pack, then build a basic chords progression. The synth in this track aren't too complex, it should be ok to reproduce for a beginner
- Look into sidechain gates (or maybe tremolo with high depth?) for those "cutoff" rhythmic effects
- Look into the first videos tutorial of the channel "you suck at producing" if you're really new to Ableton and have a hard time understanding the general workflow with Ableton
No. 722764
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Oooh neat, we have a music production thread.
I'm currently suffering. I've never had this many tracks in a song before. And somehow I managed to master it properly.
No. 745212
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Is it even possible to meet musicians and jam with them online? I've recently started learning a new instrument but I have no clue where to find people to make music with because everything is closed irl.
No. 745605
>>745212>>745496I recommend any of the following:
>Bandmix>Kompoz (.com I think)On the first one you can find musicians with like-minded taste and organise virtual jam sessions (outside of the website though). On the second you can post your track and people will propose added layers as needed (eg if you want to add bass to a track but you suck at it or you don't have the skills). On both sites I met (IRL and virtually) people with whom I could both work on music tracks and add stuff to their work, jam with (pleeeeeeenty of sessions thanks to both sites) and generally discuss a lot of stuff (in my case I play the drums so discussed gear, practice tips and websites to look out for etc).
The last one I could recommend is just go on your favorite band's website message board if it's active enough and find fans who play music directly from there. I had a lot of success finding amateur musicians way back when I started which allowed me to play with people at the same level as me. Advantage is we loved the same bands so knew the same songs and could learn to play together on something we were all very familiar with. We progressed all together and after roughly 3 years each learning our own instrument, we even put out a few covers of the band we liked on youtube (each recording in our own place because we were from different countries and then one of us doing some mastering of the final output - ahead of the covid curve somehow).
It's definitely possible to find people willing to rehearse and practice virtually, it's a lot more work than doing it IRL (which frankly was equally challenging anyway). There definitely might be better places than those 3 options (haven't looked at anything lately but with covid, I hope people got creative in the music solution department). Hopefully other anons have more ideas.
Sorry for the long post, hope that helps!
No. 745613
Sorry for the samefagging, just wanted to add I made a quick search and found that :
https://jamkazam.com/Haven't tried it yet so can't vouch for how good it truly is but will report back when tested if anyone's interested
No. 764718
>>745605This sounds promising.
I'd like to sing on someone's track or collab with someone since I write poetry/lyrics. I know I have an objectively good voice but I'm shy about approaching people to work with.